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2. In the same document, refer to your AP style guide to rewrite the following sentence, correcting three errors in it:

The NASA spacecraft is approaching Jupiter, which has a diameter more than eleven times greater than that of Earth.

Answer :

The given statement can be written as below after correcting the three errors in it:


Given statement: The N.A.S.A. spacecraft is approaching Jupiter, which has a diameter more than eleven times greater than that of earth.


Corrected statement: The NASA spacecraft is approaching Jupiter, which has a diameter more than 11 times greater than that of Earth.


Corrections made:

  • The name abbreviation of the name of the National Aeronautics and Space Administration is formally written and NASA and not N.A.S.A.
  • The correct way of mentioning a number in a sentence is by putting it in digits (11 not eleven).
  • Earth is a noun. Hence the first letter of the word should be capitalized.

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